"After Death" - original fiction

For my Creative Writing class, we had to write a short story. I got mine from a surprisingly coherent dream that mixed my grandfather's death with elements of - sigh - the Supernatural/Grey's Anatomy crossover I was working on at the time. It's still original fiction, and I'm happy enough with it to post it here and see what the flist thinks. Even if you think it's crap. I can take it.



( She hated ghost movies. Not because they were scary; on the contrary, they weren't scary, because they got everything wrong. )