OMFG!!!11eleventyone!11 That was just...wow. At first, like you said, I was all "Gah, OC! Mary Sue time!" But was feeling desperate enough for non Owen/Tosh, Owen fic that I took a peek anyway, and got sucked in. Michael seemed totally real, not at all Mary Sue like, I just adored him and Owen then screeched at the computer screen when he killed Owen and said he was Grey!! There's more right? MORE?! Please?!